Untuk pertamakalinya gue yang jadi pemeran utamanya haha. Sebenernya sih videonya dibuat bukan untuk mengiklankan produk tersebut, tapi buat tugas proses komunikasi. Btw, video ini dibuat bersama
Nurendra Riastyano, Baleck setiaji, Dodi Pratondo, Dendy, & Rubi Prabu,
Nurendra Riastyano, Baleck setiaji, Dodi Pratondo, Dendy, & Rubi Prabu,
hello, andra!
ReplyDeletei've watched it, ndra..
hmmm, what should i comment to you?
okay, first of all, i like your act skill (y)
it seems so natural (i think you have another talent in acting)
secondly, i like the video's angle. it supports the viewers to feel into it.
but, i think there's some 'words' which could be replaced by another word, like "mampus gw" it can be replaced by "astaga! telat gw" or "jam berapa ini?!"
why? because advertisement is something that you usually used to introduces something to public, so it probably has some bad effects for viewers if they used that kinda word. for the other word, you teach public for using that kinda word.
okay, i think those are my opinions.
then, i wanna give you some feedback for your next task:
learn more about some software. it'll help you a lot! don't be tired to improve your skill, ndra! Because sometime, a good advertisement can be reached by vision or less word.
wanna take a look for some examples?
this is a video of Pasar Seni ITB 2010 event, it's surely made by an high skill hands i think. Try to learn to be like this, even more, okay? I know you can do more than this advertisement.
This is the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tOR8SY3fxEQ&feature=related
another advertisement:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HW_iW5VEDN8&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CJOmHEnlOZk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BJOUaCEFKMQ&feature=related
Do you remember, my schoolmate, iyas? She was study in advertisement major in University of Indonesia. And this is her gallery about making some advertisements by poster. Take a look!
http://yazzmustbecrazy.deviantart.com/gallery/
Good luck for your next project and don't give up easily, ndra! You have to learn a lot for becoming a wonderful and briliant designer :)
i'm waiting for the better!! ^^
NB: if you need any help from me, just ask me okay? (like information about what kind of software, etc. i'll try to help you by asking from my friends in architecture, art, and advertisement major)
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ReplyDeletewow examples you give are advertisement which is full of animation . . if i am able to make it. it'll be awesome.
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